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Sueezedtight
Sueezedtight
Occam's Haiku?
Jan 20 2009, 4:20 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 4:20 PM EST
if the edge is keen
and then the action is swift
justice is served
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Keyword tags: dark dexter haiku

bloodorinknomatter
1. RE: Occam's Haiku?
Sep 13 2009, 3:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 13 2009, 3:10 PM EDT
Flesh is unbroken
Blade pauses, immaculate
Until it finds red
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Sueezedtight
Sueezedtight
2. RE: Occam's Haiku?
Sep 14 2009, 10:32 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 10:32 AM EDT
Sentence carried out
and punctuated by death
ending, period.
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bloodorinknomatter
3. RE: Occam's Haiku?
Sep 14 2009, 8:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 8:17 PM EDT
Seething silence waits
until the dam breaks open
to drown another.
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lemaman
lemaman
4. RE: Occam's Haiku?
Oct 24 2009, 6:00 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 24 2009, 6:00 AM EDT
hollow alibi
guilty of murder he knows
painful death your fate
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SheBurns
SheBurns
5. RE: Occam's Haiku?
Oct 26 2009, 1:24 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 26 2009, 1:24 AM EDT
A small slice of life
Razor severs cheek hull slides
Through waters of blood
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Sueezedtight
Sueezedtight
6. RE: Dueling Haiku?
Oct 26 2009, 8:09 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 26 2009, 8:09 AM EDT
Lemaman and I did a little Haiku repartée....like Dex, you have to be in the moment.

pretending remorse
trying hard to convince him
failing completely
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Sueezedtight
Sueezedtight
7. RE: Dueling Haiku?
Oct 26 2009, 8:11 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 26 2009, 8:11 AM EDT
Dexter is a man
Who will make your blood run cold
Despite his warm smile.
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lemaman
lemaman
8. RE: Dueling Haiku?
Oct 27 2009, 6:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 27 2009, 6:10 PM EDT
demeanor deceives
dark passenger awakens
justice darkly served
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lemaman
lemaman
9. RE: Dueling Haiku?
Nov 4 2009, 12:39 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 4 2009, 12:39 AM EST
after hammer episode:

Godly deeds abound
triumvirate's veil revealed
ashes to ashes...
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Sueezedtight
Sueezedtight
10. RE: Dueling Haiku?
Nov 8 2009, 8:48 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 8 2009, 8:48 AM EST
Jealousy awakes
Eliminating rivals
Lundy and Anton
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