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DOA (Dexter's Onematopoetic Alliteration)
Jan 22 2009, 6:26 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 22 2009, 6:26 AM EST
Dexter dealing death
Only on onerous ones
An aortic act
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1. RE: DOA (Dexter's Onematopoetic Alliteration)
Sep 13 2009, 3:14 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 13 2009, 3:14 PM EDT
Hemoglobin hides
Vivisecting vessels, vines
Releasing red rivers
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2. RE: RIP (Really Insane Poetry)
Sep 14 2009, 10:28 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 10:28 AM EDT
Ripping redly
Into insides
Pure poetry
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3. RE: DOA (Dexter's Onematopoetic Alliteration)
Sep 14 2009, 10:30 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 10:30 AM EDT
"Hemoglobin hides
Vivisecting vessels, vines
Releasing red rivers"
It is spelled "veins", but I like your respecting the theme. Thanks!
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4. RE: DOA (Dexter's Onematopoetic Alliteration)
Sep 14 2009, 6:50 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 6:50 PM EDT
"Vines" is meant in a metaphorical sense... the blood vessels cross in a vinelike fashion. I'm in college for Biology, believe me my veins and my vines are very well differentiated Do you find this valuable?    
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5. RE: BSC Better steer clear
Sep 14 2009, 7:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 14 2009, 7:31 PM EDT
Biting bullets
simply said
continuous contrition

allegorically, of course ;-)
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