Discussion: Snapshots of My Sun,

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mike91848	Snapshots of My Sun, Feb 1 2009, 11:42 AM EST Very good! Post reply Do you find this valuable? Keyword tags: Dexter poetry
Sueezedtight	1. Does Dex have a poetic license to kill? Feb 1 2009, 1:43 PM EST \| Post edited: Feb 1 2009, 1:43 PM EST Grace fall At those times you fall from grace You never land upon your feet But rather in a way that seems To end so bittersweet. That state of grace from which you fell Had all you’d ever need But being unaware of this You end up swayed by greed. For goodness takes a lot of work The other’s easy if you try By letting go of what is good life without love is just a lie. With time you’ll find that you’ve become A prisoner of the cell you’ll make With all those bars you cannot break. From each and every small mistake. Post reply 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Sueezedtight	2. RE: Does Dex have a poetic license to kill? Feb 10 2009, 5:34 PM EST Moonlit mayhem The darkness enfolds him like a cloak Wary eyes see naught as he remains in shadow Stealing into position,unannounced, unforeseen HIs sceptre's needle at the ready Injecting truth to still their cries He takes them to their judge and jury Images of what they did surround them Faced with their fate , they are unwilling Justice served, without fail or flaw Obtaining retribution as they die. Avenging angel, Dexter-style. Post reply Do you find this valuable?